Daily Lower Thirds

[acinger]

Hey there, i have created a News channel style Lower third and could need some feedback on it.
So if you have any ideas improving it.. critique is always welcome!
Shall i add more stuff like Light Sweeps etc? Just let me know what you like and don't like.
Andy

 

[PunkJax]

I feel like your animations are pretty good, but your typography definitely needs work. A lot of your type here seems weirdly squished and awkwardly kerned. You should never resize your type unevenly or it looks squished, and as for kerning, try changing Metric to Optical? Kerning is something you learn over time i feel.

Anyway, as for animation, you're generally pretty good and improving will come to you personally in time and research and experimenting. I feel maybe your easing could use a little manual cleanup, I guess? But it's honestly that big of a deal. Great job.