Review4Review hai guys, please give review for my video

[YOKSGaming]

hai Freedom Family... i already upload a new videos about Dota2
and i need your review about my video.. and im sorry, really really sorry if you dont understand what im saying because im from indonesia and im speak indonesian.. Thanks

 

[Joe Obv]

Hey Man,

I am going to try and review even though I dont understand what is being said

Some times throughout the video, it falls silent. You need to try and fill the gaps. What I do with my videos is make sure I have a small outlined script so I know what to move onto next.

This isnt a word for word script, more like bullet points and really helps give me ideas when recording.

Hopefully this helps Keep up the good work.

 

[YOKSGaming]

Hey Man,

I am going to try and review even though I dont understand what is being said

Some times throughout the video, it falls silent. You need to try and fill the gaps. What I do with my videos is make sure I have a small outlined script so I know what to move onto next.

This isnt a word for word script, more like bullet points and really helps give me ideas when recording.

Hopefully this helps Keep up the good work.

thanks broo